Hmm... so it's a story about the Invisible Man? (I'm just guessing, heh). The line "I developed like a Polaroid picture" struck me as notably poetic because it made think of people slowly coming out of a fog. But from what I gather... that might not have been a metaphor, heh - this fella here might actually be literally developing in front of our eyes.
Anyways - I meant to comment on your post in Bumble's thread (where you wrote that your approach to art-making is in 'reverse' because you developed the shading before you developed the line-making) and yeah, I guess it goes without saying that when it comes to art, there is no single "right" path, haha. Or if there is, I doubt anybody's discovered it yet. Ideally, eventually, we would all develop both line-art aptitudes and shading aptitudes, so whichever we gravitate to first likely doesn't matter, I'm assuming.
But this leads me in to another random side-thought that I might have said before (because it'something I've been thinking about lately), but that I still find interesting anyway, heh. The distinction between "painters" and "drawers". The 2 approaches are fairly different. Drawers outline everything (and the point should also be mentioned too that these "outlines" don't actually exist in reality; like, nothing on this Earth walks around with a "pencil outlines" in the same that we would draw it) whereas painters work with blocks of light and colour...which is a bit different. I'm not really well-versed enough in this kind of stuff to say much more than that, but basically what I'm leading up to is that, if you did gravitate more towards shading initially when you started drawing...you might have a bit of a painter in you, heh, because you seem to have an awareness of shades that somebody like myself for instance (I didn't even notice that all my childhood Saturday morning cartoons were shaded until I was way past cartoon age - I thought of them as simply line drawings filled with solid colour; and when I would draw them as a kid, that's how I would approach them), wouldn't have. Maybe, I dunno.
And what does this have to do with anything in your thread?! Nothing, as far as I know, heh. I just started typing and the post above is what came out, haha. Whoops. Ah well. Maybe I just wanted to work some thoughts out on things for myself and the fact that you have a thread here is just a convenient location for me to do so, haha.
Anyways! Lookin' forward to when you get back and finish this serial (if you choose to), Fade-