I did replace manager with his name and took den's suggestion, also figured out on my own about the thank-you -> thank you, but other then that I had to go ahead and print it with the comma mistakes and "in-progress towards".
Also I wasn't interviewed by the manager, it was by a guy named Mario and then a guy named Greg.
I'm a bit worried
Also I wasn't interviewed by the manager, it was by a guy named Mario and then a guy named Greg.
I'm a bit worried