I'm writing an essay on space travel. Rough draft is here.

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YAOMTC

Attached is the rough draft. Let me know what you think! I need to make positive changes for the final draft (it also has to be about two pages longer at least).

It's classified as an "argumentative research essay".

[attachment=0:29jhpmnp]space.odt[/attachment:29jhpmnp]

Here is a PDF version, if you're unable to open ODT.
 
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Aisaku

I think it's great and down to the point. I really hope that mankind does eventually march onward into space. Unfortunately I am not a native english speaker so there is little else that I can add.
 
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Cuyval Dar

Add something about tachyon beams, and reversing the polarity of the quantum converters. Oh, and how we need to develop a Prime Directive so we do not interfere with the development of primitive civilizations.
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