Let's play "Critique my resume"

[Emrys]

I'm applying for a part-time job because doomweasels are frakkin' expensive to feed. Water buffalo don't come cheap, ya know. So would any of your kind souls be willing to look over the resume I've put together for this position?

Just to let you know, I'm not looking for a professional opinion. I need you to look it over for spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, clarity, etc.

 

[drawn_inward]

Curriculum vitae

Emrys
Address: So far North that it's South

Education: Académie de Formation Doom-Belette
Experience: Doomweasel training including, but not limited to:

• Search and destroy
• Espionage
• Assassinations

 

[Emrys]

Curriculum vitae

Emrys
Address: So far North that it's South

Education: Académie de Formation Doom-Belette
Experience: Doomweasel training including, but not limited to:

• Search and destroy
• Espionage
• Assassinations

Oh, so you've already seen it?

 

[drawn_inward]

I can look at it if you would like. I may not be the best judgement of such things though.

 

[tegid]

I can look at it if you want, but of course won't be offended if you'd rather have someone else's opinion than mine

Whomever you send it to, include a description of the position, it's important! (To judge de CV according to it)

 

[Simfers]

Send it over if you want, if nothing else I can check for typos. I believe you already have my e-mail, yes?

 

[Squidleybits]

I'd be happy to have a look if you'd like