Dave Staff member Dec 18, 2015 #4 The kid in the last panel looks...funky. No, I couldn't do better. But it looks like he bulked up between the third and fourth panel. The strip is good, but the pose just looks uncomfortable and unnatural.
The kid in the last panel looks...funky. No, I couldn't do better. But it looks like he bulked up between the third and fourth panel. The strip is good, but the pose just looks uncomfortable and unnatural.
PatrThom Dec 18, 2015 #5 I'd also like to thank you for not treating boy child as stereotypical cute/dumb butt-of-all-jokes, like they did Pugsley in the Addams Family movies. --Patrick
I'd also like to thank you for not treating boy child as stereotypical cute/dumb butt-of-all-jokes, like they did Pugsley in the Addams Family movies. --Patrick
Zappit Staff member Dec 18, 2015 #6 Dave said: The kid in the last panel looks...funky. No, I couldn't do better. But it looks like he bulked up between the third and fourth panel. The strip is good, but the pose just looks uncomfortable and unnatural. Click to expand... Truth be told, that was a rush panel, and I did notice the shoulder was a bit off.
Dave said: The kid in the last panel looks...funky. No, I couldn't do better. But it looks like he bulked up between the third and fourth panel. The strip is good, but the pose just looks uncomfortable and unnatural. Click to expand... Truth be told, that was a rush panel, and I did notice the shoulder was a bit off.
