My only
big issue was the same as Dave's, with the comic cover that didn't fade fast enough to read the words behind it.
There was also a small issue @9:32 or so where you say people buying multiple copies would "conflate" sales figures (instead of "inflate"). You hesitate, so I wonder if you knew it in the moment, but then never went back to fix it.
Heh. I like how the picture of Jerry Ordway where you quote him saying, "Let's kill him!" has him wearing a
Dexter lanyard.
You have a good voice for this kind of thing.
I want to touch on this.
You are probably already aware that your voice does not sound like that of James Earl Jones, Christoper Lee, Brian Blessed, Morgan Freeman, John Rhys-Davies, or even Richard Burton.
And that's fine. These are people known for their cultured, stately, formal tone and delivery, but this video is not about that. Your voice sounds more ordinary, more
vulnerable, and is definitely the kind of voice that I expect to tell me about how a 9yr-old discovered comics.
So I guess what I'm saying is...you should always wear the outfit when you record.
And if DC allows it, you should
also wear it to any interviews you ever do.
--Patrick