As someone who has done standup and some sketch comedy...I have to say this did nothing for me.
Nitpicks:
1) No discernible punchline. It just kinda ends.
2) No real joke or explanation as to why the little girl was traumatized. This probably could have been fixed by having them stay longer and react as the guy melted down more. A punchline could have been effective at the end. "Jeff! We have to reboot Jim again!"
That's about it. The video quality and acting were great, but the material was weak.
I am interested in seeing more stuff, but this one fell flat for me.