PA Spoilers for Monday
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OMG YOU SPOILED PA AND I DON'T UNDERSTAND IT RAARRRG ARRG BLARRRG MY LIFE IS OVER MY ROUTINE IS FUCKED I WILL FIND YOUR GUTS AND SPILL THEM!
Yeah, you put a Spoiler warning in the title, but PA? That's non-specific! That could've been Police Academy! In fact, I thought it was!
DAMN YOU DAVE I WILL HUNT YOU LIKE CATTLE
Yeah, you put a Spoiler warning in the title, but PA? That's non-specific! That could've been Police Academy! In fact, I thought it was!
DAMN YOU DAVE I WILL HUNT YOU LIKE CATTLE
Explain this, please.
I think as first pages go, this one is particularly excellent.
Explain this, please.
I think as first pages go, this one is particularly excellent.[/QUOTE]
The text at the bottom is too similar to the style of Tiny Kitten Teeth for me.
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Soliloquy
Yeah, the tiny kitten teeth one was pretty awful, honestly. It was pretty much a fan fiction of a single page of story. It had none of the substance that the first page promised.
This had better be better.
This had better be better.
Explain this, please.
I think as first pages go, this one is particularly excellent.[/QUOTE]
The text at the bottom is too similar to the style of Tiny Kitten Teeth for me.[/QUOTE]
I think it fits the series. At least it's not papyrus.
Besides, there were people who really liked the TKT version, and it would be stupid to leave them all behind, and possibly a slap in the face of the TKT author(s).
I don't know the PA guys personally, but from what little I've seen hey are pretty stand-up guys. I don't think they'll mess this up, even if they keep some of the good pieces from the previous work.
At least they have a good sense of comic flow - we shouldn't be left staring at panels trying to figure out in what order the action and talking goes. Aside from the art and color style, the nebulous comic flow was the worst part of the previous attempt.
We shall see soon enough, though - two whole weeks of this ought to either solidify it as a fan favorite, or at least ruin it well enough that they won't attempt it again. The worst possible outcome would be if it was just lukewarm - neither great nor horrible. That would make me a sad panda. If you're going to fail, do so spectacularly - at least that's a little entertaining.
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I'm curious though: Was it the TKT people who wrote the last version, along with drawing it?
Because if Tycho wrote it, I have no faith that this one will be any better. The writing was awful in the last one: it flat out refused to explore the universe any more than was already established in the meager one-page preview that Tycho and Gabe set up.
Because if Tycho wrote it, I have no faith that this one will be any better. The writing was awful in the last one: it flat out refused to explore the universe any more than was already established in the meager one-page preview that Tycho and Gabe set up.
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Thank. God.
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Honestly, I think that the premise of Lookouts has a lot of promise in the world of graphic literature,
The idea seems strikingly relevant in a world where the common philosophy to parenting is that children should be sheltered from any possibility of harm, even at the expense of not learning valuable life skills. The world of Lookouts take a polar opposite approach, teaching children to deal with mortal danger by bringing them right into the thick of it. And the dense style of writing that Tycho tends to use for stories of this type works perfectly.
If this turns out as good as I hope it will (though my hopes may be unrealistically high) then I honestly think that Tycho and Gabe should look into making a major graphic novel project out of the idea.
The idea seems strikingly relevant in a world where the common philosophy to parenting is that children should be sheltered from any possibility of harm, even at the expense of not learning valuable life skills. The world of Lookouts take a polar opposite approach, teaching children to deal with mortal danger by bringing them right into the thick of it. And the dense style of writing that Tycho tends to use for stories of this type works perfectly.
If this turns out as good as I hope it will (though my hopes may be unrealistically high) then I honestly think that Tycho and Gabe should look into making a major graphic novel project out of the idea.
You've just seemingly described 90% of anime, and, well, the monomyth.
I'd love to see them make a graphic novel, but I'd be more interested in seeing them make it of Automata.
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You've just seemingly described 90% of anime, and, well, the monomyth.[/QUOTE]
All right, let me rephrase that: the premise focuses on an organization whose sole purpose is to teach children to deal with the many mortal dangers in the world they inhabit by bringing them right into the thick of it.
There, that better?
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I'd love to see them make a graphic novel, but I'd be more interested in seeing them make it of Automata.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I was surprised at how good automata was, when they actually wrote more than one page of it.
Automata was good, but the design really reminded me of the Big O world. I had voted for Lookouts at the time and was quite disappointed to not get Gabe & Tycho doing it. The art on that run was just confusing.
I've checked out the Tiny Kitten Teeth comic and their art style really is more suited for their work. Their comic is a comedic tale of animals in college and the pseudo-'60s art style they use (which is reminiscent of advertising looks on characters like Tony the Tiger at that time) fits the tone and feel better than the fantasy adventure of The Lookouts.
The artwork this time is a million times better, but that should be expected. I really love gabe's artwork, he has a great feel for how each panel should look.
The second to last panel in page two... where we see just the hint of a smile on the man behind the owl-mask... I don't know why, but that strikes me as a really great panel.
The second to last panel in page two... where we see just the hint of a smile on the man behind the owl-mask... I don't know why, but that strikes me as a really great panel.
Plus, it pulls off a way of conveying the emotions of a person concealed by a mask without resorting to "THAT MAKES ME FEEL ANGRY!"
Hear, hear.
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It really shows that Tycho and Gabe are fathers, doesn't it?
Is it me, or has some considerable time passed between the 2nd and 3rd panels of today's comic? (5/3) If the kid on the far right of the last panel is the round-headed kid in the first two, then he has grown in the interim. The kid with the longer black hair looks more like the kid 2nd from right in the last panel.
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