We have a winner!
Here's how the voting was done.
I took each entry and put it into an Excel spreadsheet. I then put a column called Random and put in "=rand()", then ordered the sheet ascending on the random number. Then I isolated them by threes and had people pick their favorites from each triad. Once I got it down to the top 10 I showed them around and had each person tell me their top 3.
Two entries received a vote from EACH PERSON I showed them to! We talked about it and decided which one was the winner. I then went to the entries...and found out that BOTH entries were written by....
MIND DETECTIVE!!!
First place entry:
The live feed buffers then a girl drags her bloody legs across a concrete floor. With a sob I realize no ransom will save my daughter now.
Second place entry:
I'm trapped beneath a once-wall, coughing concrete dust. I hid my deeds too well. My final victim's gray eye dangles, watching as I starve.
So congrats MindDetective!
What does he win? Only this: