Honestly, there's a few things that bother me about the review:Honestly? If the only complaint they have is "crude language" making it "not fun," I'd say you did something right. It's hardly a reflection on your writing that one person would've rather had a children's book.
1) It wasn't even her that read it. It was her husband.
2) He only read three pages. That's not even a full chapter.
3) That they still posted a review despite not reading the whole book.[DOUBLEPOST=1491177454,1491177348][/DOUBLEPOST]
"Goddamn lousy ingrate didn't even read the whole damn book? Bastard ain't worth your time."What would Dill say?
...huh. Might sound weird, but that was me writing that without even thinking. Dill just pulled a Dill.
Fuck it. I'm hitting the treadmill and sweating out this peevishness.